CELPIP Writing: Responding to a Survey. Prompt 2- Essay 2 (Support for Costumes)
Position: spend money on consumes
- Introduction
Neutral statement: Costumes are important when doing a production of a play.
Implicit thesis statement: Detailed costumes that support the exact period of a theatre production are important.
Explicit thesis statement: I believe that costumes must fit the period of the play’s production, so money spent here is never wasted.
- Body Paragraph
Topic sentence: There are many reasons why costumes are critical to a theatrical play. First of all, people who come to the theatre want to be entertained. The best way to entertain is by making them believe, through their imagination, that this play is true to life, so costumes are an important segue to allow people to believe what is being portrayed before them. Besides, nobody would believe it was Queen Elizabeth before them if she were not wearing a ruffed neckpiece, a crown, and jewels. Further, costumes also make the theatre experience contiguous if all the characters, the major and minor ones, are wearing costumes that detail their position, as you would expect a beggar to wear a realistic motley when on stage.
- Conclusion
In conclusion, people accept the veracity of a play if the clothes the actors are wearing are suitable and accurate for the time period.
Essay 2
Costumes are important when doing a production of a play. Detailed costumes that support the exact period of a theatre production are important.
There are many reasons why costumes are critical to a theatrical play. First of all, people who come to the theatre want to be entertained. The best way to entertain is by making them believe, through their imagination, that this play is true to life, so costumes are an important segue to allow people to believe what is being portrayed before them. Besides, nobody would believe it was Queen Elizabeth before them if she were not wearing a ruffed neckpiece, a crown, and jewels. Further, costumes also make the theatre experience contiguous if all the characters, the major and minor ones, are wearing costumes that detail their position, as you would expect a beggar to wear a realistic motley when on stage.
In conclusion, people accept the veracity of a play if the clothes the actors are wearing are suitable and accurate to the period they represent. (169 words)
Essay 2: Signal words and criteria related to vocabulary
Costumes are important when doing a production of a play. Detailed costumes that support the exact period of a theatre production are important.
There are many reasons why costumes are critical to a theatrical play. First of all, people who come to the theatre want to be entertained. The best way to entertain is by making them believe, through their imagination, that this play is true to life, so costumes are an important segue to allow people to believe what is being portrayed before them. Besides, nobody would believe it was Queen Elizabeth before them if she were not wearing a ruffed neckpiece, a crown, and jewels. Further, costumes also make the theatre experience contiguous if all the characters, the major and minor ones, are wearing costumes that detail their position, as you would expect a beggar to wear a realistic motley when on stage.
In conclusion, people accept the veracity of a play if the clothes the actors are wearing are suitable and accurate to the period they represent.
